Ok... since you did the music video for someone else's song that I didn't like, I am not going to rate you on the song. Not your lyrics or concept.
So my rating is based on this: The large amount of clipping, the odd, stiff movements when Samus was running, I have no idea where she was keeping that locket that she could take it out of her sealed armor like that....
The video didn't seem to really be going "along with" the music video so much as just show Samus doing.. stuff. That she usually does.
Contrary to your defense of them... The voicing acting isn't believable, the audio quality for the voice recordings is not the greatest, and the voices aren't remotely fitting to the models. Sayako especially sounds like a young girl instead of an adult. I get the mental image of a 14 year old listening to her voice, which is not really appealing. XD
I won't harp on the big boobs, but the outfits are pretty ridiculous. No one is legally going to walk around in the outfit you have Tara in, she would be arrested for indecent exposure. Which further sets up the "this is just going to be a porn" feeling, which completely conflicts with the score/music.
The expressions, especially on Sayako, are well done, and the small amounts of animation are fairly well done and fluid. I don't know how much credit to give you for the renderings though since you admitted to using bases, and I didn't see, or bother to look hard enough for your links to your original sources. >)
But the concept itself is not original or appealing.
As I stated I can't get over how inappropriate the music was for the type of teaser this is supposed to be. The music implies something epic is about to happen - and I don't mean epic as in girl-on-girl sex. Epic as in we're about to go on a timeless quest to save the universe. Which I'm pretty sure they aren't doing.
Overall I can't give this many stars. I like hentai fine when it's done well and classy - but this does not come across as classy. The faces and hair on the models are beautiful, but the way the boobs and butts are done makes them look like ducks when seen from the side. I'm not asking you to change it, just stating it doesn't mesh with my aesthetics. I like sexy women and large breasts are fine, but they just look uncomfortable.
Change up the music sequence, change up the acting (either get the girls to sound less.. girly.. or change VOs entirely), and this would improve in my opinion.
(Also, I sincerely hope your VAs are both over 18, Sayako especially didn't sound like it. >w<)
Well I think the voice overs are great, doesn't mean you have to like them of course. Everyone has different taste. The girl voicing Sayako is mid twenties, btw.
Also sometimes given the medium we do things that go beyond reality... like EVERY hentai or animation ever created!! Hence the liberty I took with their clothing. I still think you're hung up on the fact that it's porn and you want to make it seem of little value and indecent (just my assumption. I'm not saying you are). Sorry, I think exactly the opposite. I love porn!
If I had the choice between watching a movie of some timeless quest or 2 girls having sex, I chose the latter (depending on the overall production values of course)! Hope that explains the music :D Thanks for the feedback!
Okay, so. First of all. Little to no animation to speak of. You did not create much in the way of artwork since you just used established art and sprite(s). Further, this animation is not directly related to really anything. Your project would be better hosted/presented on a forum and not submitted as an original "flash animation".
Your comment was not needed here Unless your posting a character -_-
The video and animation are epic.
However... I do not see how the song/poem even remotely relates to the animation. The melody and lyrics did not evoke the kind of feeling I would want to experience while watching scenes like the ones in the video.
For that, I can't bring myself to provide any higher rating than this.
lol... President Evil....
The animation and overall story were funny, I loved it :)
D: HOW ARE THEY BLINKING WITH NO EYELIDS??!!??!?!!
They are blinking without eyelids so people like you will ask questions like that.
Nah. I just felt like it. Wanted to see what it'd look like and..... wait. You voted it a 1 because of THAT?! It wasn't entertaining at ALL?! *dropjaw* Oh my gosh!! *covers head with paper bag* I don't know who you aaaaaare!!!!!! *wanders off, narrowly missing running into things*
The animation was not bad (though minimalistic), but it went on too long for what it was.
Thats right, i hope i do best in my second animation.
But i have problems with flash, (erase, cut or edit things in the moment of save changes)
The animation isn't bad - however the fact that it's really just an intro for your youtube(?) channel makes it kind of pointless. There is no entertainment value here.
I try to do best next time (this is my first time with flash)
The animation was pretty good - however, the premise is familiar (I've seen Ditto vs Metapod done before, and it's technically in the series I think, only it was two Metapods and not a Metapod and a Ditto). Otherwise the voice acting was pretty good.
The humor was purely from George Carlin's work. Your animations and expressions added to it, but the actual work on your part was so minimal, I can't vote as high as I would had you created the whole skit. Any more stars would be for Mr. Carlin.
I am not trying to insult you mind you - I am just pointing out I'm not able to give you as high of a score because so little of the original content was yours.
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